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A Step Too Far - Chapter 15

🕑 Added 2024-02-20 22:06:12 +0000 UTC

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horuvex

Thanks! I should have more time this month to add to the story, since some real life contracts I had came to an end.

Unknown1

Hoping for a May update with this FANTASTIC story I love where it's going and with each update it just gets more and more exciting, so here's to hopeful May?

horuvex

No worries. This has just happened to me before a few times, especially way way back when I used to post on Yahoo Groups. I'll have to pay closer attention to numeric measurements and ratios. Thanks.

jsm109

Hey, my intent wasn’t to nitpick but offer something constructive. I’ve written nothing but praise for your work and likely will for the foreseeable future. Your stuff is leagues ahead of everyone else’s in terms of quality and character development. I just found myself a little thrown off while rereading the ending. An 8 inch upper thigh height on a roughly two foot guy just seemed way off to me. Since measurements and size references remain central to the plot, I figured I’d share a tool that I like to use. When I did for yours, I get a height just above the knee.

horuvex

I am not sure if there will be an update in March, though I will try to put another chapter out early this spring. This is why I avoid naming numerical heights and things because it always results in people pulling out their rulers. It's the same reason I don't write fantasy with hard magic systems, nor indulge in hard sci-fi. When I used that tool you sent, I got a different result, but I also know human bodies vary in proportion. Thanks for the reference.

jsm109

How goes it? Any chance for a march update? No worries or rush if not. Also, one small tip. Before you reference specific height measurements in relation to him, you should try using the following tool: https://www.mrinitialman.com/OddsEnds/Sizes/compsizes.xhtml You mentioned him being a quarter inch below two feet, then described the eight-inch marking on the wall at his upper thigh height and one foot at his navel. At approximately two feet tall, eight inches would be much closer to knee height, and one foot be at his crotch.

horuvex

You're welcome. I am glad you enjoyed the latest chapter. "Suffocating" is an interesting way to describe Teddy's predicament and perhaps accurate in a way. The walls are closing in on him in a sense. Hmm... Scary and hot is the vibe I was going for, so I am glad to know I achieved it.

Attec

Thank you for the chapter as always, it was amazing! Teddy’s situation seems to be increasingly inescapable and suffocating, and you describe it a way that is both scary and hot haha

horuvex

Thanks dankeall. I am glad you are enjoying the story and the direction the narrative is going.

dankeall

Amazing chapter. When previous one were incredible, this take another level. I'm enjoying all the process, nice work horuvex

horuvex

Thanks stevebasic. That moment is pretty pivotal. I am glad you enjoyed the chapter.

stevebasic

Great entry, nice to see more from you. The moment her fingers close around him and she lifts him was transcendent. Fantastic work :)

horuvex

I am glad you enjoyed this steamy chapter. The question is, can Teddy stop Vivianne's designs on him, or Morganna's? It seems unlikely...but then he will be in a real pickle. You have rather sordid hopes for poor Teddy, lol. Hmm...I'm glad I was able to inadvertently meet some of your ideal outcomes here. It is unclear how tall Vivianne is right now. I think Teddy is too distracted by his loss of size to even be able to tell. From his perspective, she is a giantess. But that specific height detail may crystalize later.

horuvex

Haha, thanks. :P

horuvex

I am glad you are enjoying the reversal of certain sexual norms. I think it's pretty hot myself. Time well tell who is the biggest in the end. ;)

horuvex

You are most welcome!

jsm109

Good god this was worth the wait. Vivianne is GOAT status for me. I hope all this foreshadowing leads to her actually using his full body like she did with the dildo in this chapter. A nice, long session w aggressive thrusts, not just putting him in and leaving him there. Once he’s the right size ofc. Maybe even a suction cup for him too? I realize this is your story and not a personal commission, lol. With this chapter it certainly felt like one though! Ok, I’ll stop now. This chapter was amazing. Also, how tall is vivianne now? Last we saw her she claimed to be around 7 feet tall, and she grew in this one…

Unknown1

not only back but with a freaking AMAZING chapter!

Kokoji

"More of everything" Good lord. From the way Vivianne is talking she WILL be the biggest in the household soon enough. (Or maybe that's just my wishful thinking) I love the switch in power from male to female orgasms! The pecking order has changed in a perfect way!

Jona

Ridiculously good, thanks for the new chapter!

horuvex

Thank you.

Abraxas

Welcome back! It’s so good to read your work again.

horuvex

Thank you. She is a force to be reckoned with ;)

Deano592

Great update ! Wonderful to see you back. The way Vivianne dominates Teddy is incredible


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