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Dick Picture Perfect - Chapter 14
Hey! If you are not up to date with DPP you can read the previous chapters here:https://drive.google.com/open?id=1PjgC9gOuSUlhIQ7DIuqs3ilXWPemuWh7Starting today, we are on a Dick Picture Perfect / Every Woman Has a Price two week schedule. I'm excited to get further and deeper into each of these stories as they are both ready for some big clashes! I also intend to keep post the next Small Town...
Pencils Down! Blizzard's Finale and Epilogue!
My editor has finally signed off! We are finished editing the entirety of Blizzard!Wow, this has been an intense journey since we started working together in late November. I've learned, "This looks good, this looks good, let's just take one last run through the whole thing." means "I need you to give me all of your free time for the next seven days, and then I'm going to d...
Every Woman Has a Price - 14 - Meat Market
If you are not up to date on Every Woman Has a Price - read the previous chapters here:https://drive.google.com/open?id=1r9Ugk3EYFL1TurzgulHsycd7PqldTYOxApologies, this is two days late. Blizzard edits have consumed most of my bandwidth the last two months. When I went to post this on monday, I noticed I had written the chapter as if Owen's wrist was in perfect health. It didn't make sense...
Dick Picture Perfect -13
If you are not up to date on Dick Picture Perfect, you may read it all here:https://drive.google.com/open?id=1PjgC9gOuSUlhIQ7DIuqs3ilXWPemuWh7I posted chapter 27 of Blizzard last Tuesday morning. Now, at the bottom of every Blizzard chapter are links to chapter 1, the master folder, and the next chapter. Is this appreciated? I can force myself to find the time to do the same for DPP and Price this...
Blizzard - 27 + Professionally Edited Rewrite
If you've been reading Blizzard from the beginning, first: thank you!Second: you might want to read it again! I've been working with an editor, and we've improved it considerably: not just fixing the missing/wrong/extra words, and the punctuation errors, but actual changes (above and beyond making Sam a brunette). We've smoothed out mischaracterizations ("Gene would NEVER do th...
Every Woman Has A Price - 13 - Pot Committed
Hi, if you are not caught up to date on Every Woman Has a Price, you can read the previous chapters here:https://drive.google.com/open?id=1r9Ugk3EYFL1TurzgulHsycd7PqldTYOxThe corrections with Blizzard are going great! I expect that with chapter 27 posting next Monday, I'll be able to post the full corrected novel. (With the exception of chapters 28 and 29 that are posting on February 3rd.) I a...
Dick Picture Perfect - 12
Hi, hope everyone's had a grate year/decade/life! Happy New Year!If you are not up to date on Dick Picture Perfect, read the previous chapters here:https://drive.google.com/open?id=1PjgC9gOuSUlhIQ7DIuqs3ilXWPemuWh7Looking forward to an even more productive year with all of you! Thank you for the support!
Funhouse Mirrors
Hi, this story was commissioned over November. I hope you like it. Thank you all for your support!Blurb: A new PhD takes his first teaching job at an out of the way college, when he's voluntold to set up a Frosh Week display, he takes a few gizmos out of his predecessor's unclaimed belongings setting off a sexual chain reaction among the new semester's freshmen.Tags: MF, FF, Mind Contr...
Every Woman has a Price - 12 - Collections
Hi, if you are not up to date on Every Woman has a Price, read the previous chapters here:https://drive.google.com/open?id=1r9Ugk3EYFL1TurzgulHsycd7PqldTYOxNext week I will be uploading chapter 26 of 29 of Blizzard. DS and I are going hard and deep through the editing and corrections of the whole story. I hope, to have the entire back chapters edited and available next Monday, the 23rd, or by Chri...
Dick Picture Perfect - 11
Hey! Another chapter of Dick Picture Perfect! I hope you like it! If you are not caught up to date on DPP, you can read the previous chapters here:https://drive.google.com/open?id=1PjgC9gOuSUlhIQ7DIuqs3ilXWPemuWh7Blizzard editing and corrections are going amazingly. I have everything but the epilogue finished. (chapter 29). The main three girls in Blizzard are Blonde, Redhead, and Blonde. The stor...
Every Woman Has a Price - 1 - Insider Trading
Another chapter of Price. I feel like I am forcing the story to move along at a good a pace. There's a lot of characters. It is not easy to include everyone. I have to make small overtures for a few of their stories. This chapter names the last woman for the story. I had plans for about a dozen more but I don't believe they add enough to the plot anymore.I am really enjoying writing Hafnan...
Dick Picture Perfect - 10
We continue into the middle of the story with all the players on the field. I hope you like it! If you are not up to date on DPP read the previous chapters here:https://drive.google.com/open?id=1PjgC9gOuSUlhIQ7DIuqs3ilXWPemuWh7Thank you all for your support!
Every Woman's Price - 10 - Handshake Deal
Another installment of the fun to write confusing feedback magnet Every Woman's Price! I hope you like it!If you are not up to date on Every Woman Has a Price, read the earlier chapters here:https://drive.google.com/open?id=1r9Ugk3EYFL1TurzgulHsycd7PqldTYOxThank you all for the support!
Daphne the Violet - Small Town Goddesses - 8
Happy Halloween!8 of 13! I am excited to give you this next installment of my Small Town Goddesses series. If you haven't read the previous 7, check them out here:https://drive.google.com/open?id=0B3_KtJ5IKlKiZkNWVmVkMXQ5XzgI have been editing and rewriting this all day today. Don't be surprised if a few more passes and improvements are edited in over the next five days or so.Thank you all...
Dick Picture Perfect - 9
Hey, this basically takes us to the end of act 2. All of the players are on the board, and anyone else who sees the dick pic is going to be used as a force amplifier.If you are not up to date on DPP, read the previous chapters here:https://drive.google.com/open?id=1PjgC9gOuSUlhIQ7DIuqs3ilXWPemuWh7Thank you all for your support!
Every Woman's Price - 9 - Externalities
Hey, everyone, sorry this is a few hours late. I'll try to do better in the future.If you are not caught up to date on Every Woman has a Price, read the earlier chapters here:https://drive.google.com/open?id=1r9Ugk3EYFL1TurzgulHsycd7PqldTYOxThank you all for the support!
Space Nut in Chapters
Yesterday I uploaded basically a YA's novel worth of a story for you all and said I was going to publish it publicly as 13 chapters. I figured maybe some of you would like access to the broken up chapters so you can read parts and better keep your place if you are called away. That's what this folder is, of course, if you'd prefer to read it as one big file, that is still up here:https...
Dick Picture Perfect - 8
Alright, I've got everything on the board and starting in chapter 9 it's all conflict until the end, with more than a modest amount of over the top sex. Or so I've planned.If you are not up to date on Dick Picture Perfect, you can read the previous chapters here:https://drive.google.com/open?id=1PjgC9gOuSUlhIQ7DIuqs3ilXWPemuWh7Thank you all for your support!
Space Nut - Attempted Title
Hi, I've got a completed story to post today. Space Nut was a commissioned piece I was asked to write over September. I was asked to write a pregnancy harem story with call backs to old 90s movies like Mac and Me where our protagonist discovers a crash landing alien. The leading lady was to be a manic pixie dream girl. The good news its already paid for so enjoy it from day one. Nonpatrons wil...
Every Woman Has A Price - 8 - Hidden Fees
Hey, if you are not caught up to date on Every Woman Has A Price, you can catch up here:https://drive.google.com/open?id=1r9Ugk3EYFL1TurzgulHsycd7PqldTYOxI feel with this chapter we get a better pace for the story. I'm looking forward to a lot of fun with Frieda.Thank you all for your support!
Dick Picture Perfect - 7
Hey, I've added another tool to my arsenal. I've started using a text to speech reader as I edit. I definitely catch more of my mistakes now. I haven't done anything retroactively yet. I will be soon. I'm going to start with Small Town Goddesses and then move on to Blizzard while doing each new chapter before I post it here.If you are not caught up with Dick Picture Perfect you can...
Every Woman Has A Price - 7 - Nickel and Dime
If you're not up to date on Every Woman Has a Price, you can read all of the previous chapters here:https://drive.google.com/open?id=1r9Ugk3EYFL1TurzgulHsycd7PqldTYOxThank you all for your support!
Georgia the Black - Small Town Goddesses 7
Wow, it has taken a while to add to this series. This is the mid point of the story. I've planned out the 13 episodes. 7 Girl the Colors and 6 Goddess the Traits. Daphne gets the Purple and the Violet. This puts the last of the goddesses and villains on stage.I really liked The Queen Fisher and The Murder Twins, but I feel I must level up the perversions a bit. I enjoyed Buzzard-Kill but Kitty...
Dick Picture Perfect - 6
Hey, if you're not caught up on DPP, you can read the rest here:https://drive.google.com/open?id=1PjgC9gOuSUlhIQ7DIuqs3ilXWPemuWh7Thank you all for your support!
Every Woman Has A Price - 6 - Kicking The Tires
Here's the next chapter of Price. I'm happy that over the next few chapters I get to focus on Owen and less on setting up the clashes.If you are not up to date on Every Woman Has A Price, read the earlier chapters here:https://drive.google.com/open?id=1r9Ugk3EYFL1TurzgulHsycd7PqldTYOxAnd good news! I've had a reader volunteer to help me with the French! So far I haven't been as bad...
Dick Picture Perfect 5
Hi, if you are not caught up to date on DPP you can read the earlier chapters here:https://drive.google.com/open?id=1PjgC9gOuSUlhIQ7DIuqs3ilXWPemuWh7Thank you all for your support!
Every Woman Has A Price - 5 - Coming Due
I'm actually happy with how I'm able to keep this story moving and it doesn't feel stalled at all. I hope you like it too.If you are not up to date on Every Woman Has a Price read the previous chapters here:https://drive.google.com/open?id=1r9Ugk3EYFL1TurzgulHsycd7PqldTYOxThank you all for the support!
Dick Picture Perfect - 4
If you are not up to date on DPP you can read the whole thing here:https://drive.google.com/open?id=1PjgC9gOuSUlhIQ7DIuqs3ilXWPemuWh7Alright, a half to one half more chapters and day 2 will begin with all of the crazy force multiplying that needs to happen. Hope you like it! Thank you for the support!
Every Woman Has A Price - 4 - Loss Prevention
So, I'm committed. All of the chapters will have business and money themes. I hadn't actually planned that when I had started.If you are not up to date on Every Woman Has A Price, read the earlier chapters (Or check out the character list) here:https://drive.google.com/open?id=1r9Ugk3EYFL1TurzgulHsycd7PqldTYOxThank you all for your support on this cloudy and grey Canada Day!
Dick Picture Perfect - 3
Here you go, and if you are not up to date on DPP I've got the entire story posted here:https://drive.google.com/open?id=1PjgC9gOuSUlhIQ7DIuqs3ilXWPemuWh7I like this chapter, as now we begin the SCIENCE!!! and add the next girl to the harem. Hope you like it.
